Sunday 20 May 2012

My Fractured Fairy Tale: The Monster of NZ

Once in a land there was a boy and his friend and their names were Tyler and Josh. They had a lollie club. Every day they would look for some magic lollies. And of course they wanted to eat them. If they eat the lollies they would be very powerful.

So one day they stole four glowing lollies and when they got back to their house they ate two each. All of a sudden a monster came flying through the wall. They freaked out BIG TIME! The monster wanted to rip their guts out.

But a monster killer saw what was happening and came and shot the monsters head off and then he shot himself because he was sick of his job. How stupid was he?



Write your own fractured fairy tale!

6 comments:

  1. Awesome Tyler
    very well writing i love it how long did it take you to write it

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    1. About 5 minutes. Why

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    2. You took longer than that but you're right, how long you took is not that important.

      What super powers did Tyler and Josh get from eating the beans?

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  2. Awesome Tyler!
    Its very scary.
    Whats your favourite part?

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  3. Wow! Tyler! I really like your Fractured Fairy tale. my favourite part is. Once in a land there was a boy and his friend and their names were Tyler and Josh.They had a lollie club what is your favourite part?.

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    1. My favourite part is where the monster killer kills the monster!

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